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hope beyond hope beyond
reason beyond us
into the beyond skies blue we’ve always dreamed

existed floating someplace else
above the hellhole of our broken lives
linked together by distance which never fades

or shortens like shadows do in the late
afternoons of winter sunshine
cold and far and white

pure but harsh and cloudy without clouds
reeking depression and limited options
such as waiting out the weather and

hoping the earth warms up and
hoping the string shrinks and
we each find the arms or flesh of the other

to sink into deep holes in the earth
the graves in which we’ll love
when the earth fades beyond ashes

and dust and storm clouds
like thunder counting the seconds
beneath the light clashes

like drawn blades in the dark sky
and we wait for something
anything to hold on to

and to believe in
beneath that hole in the sky we call
our own
©2003-2010 ~coco-ono
:iconcoco-ono:

Author's Comments

heh. no comment, really. tried to do it all dale style. but alas i have not the talent.

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:iconjaxabrat:
nice poem and very pretty work
:icondesertsonata:
What??!! You have NO talent? That's crap! Everything about this is beautiful..if I didn't like this so much I'd call you crazy!
:iconcoco-ono:
wow...umm...thanks.
+coco+
:iconbrokenspaceangel:
"pure but harsh and cloudy without clouds
reeking depression and limited options
such as waiting out the weather and

hoping the earth warms up and
hoping the string shrinks and
we each find the arms or flesh of the other"

this part made me cry. i completely know what you mean by it. these are the perfect words.
:iconemotionaldefect:
nice, coco. i liked the same lines lianne did and i figure theres no point in posting them twice.

:tux:

of course, i don't actually like penguins... aparently.... *grumble*


pepe

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things are only fragile until they break :shamrock:
:iconcoco-ono:
thankyou. i really liked that "pure but harsh and cloudy without clouds" line. it's actually the line i built the poem around. but it's always nice to know someone else appreciated it. sometimes i wonder if it's just me.
+coco+
:iconsea:
No talent? This poem is so amazing! I love the lines BrokenSpaceAngel quoted too, they are perfect...
:+fav: :-)

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~ Be just, and fear not ~
:icone-motionsickness:
yeah i really liked those lines too!! your a really taleneted writer from what i cal tell, awesome work on this poem!!!!

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i know i don't deserve this...the capacity to feel, to love, and to praise.
:iconwherethelightbends:
like drawn blades in the dark sky
and we wait for something
anything to hold on to

and to believe in
beneath that hole in the sky we call
our own.


amazing...you speak your words so perfectly...makin' me jealous...j/p..;)

--
she could stand on top of the sun if she held her breath the moment she realized her skin was nothing but a ghost.

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